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DAYDREAM: commentary

You gave my your eyes,
Like the Moon and the setting Sun,
And sowed my lost and wandering life
Like an April field.

There I held you, timeless
In my memory, where I found you
Sailing the uncharted seas
Of my afternoon mind.

when I can find the time I will begin writing some short commentaries about each of these poems. Not that I feel that they need explanation, but just some background that might enrich your experience, or just amuse you…